As major cities in the world are growing today, so do their problems. What are problems for young people who are living in the cities as the result of continued growth? How problems might be solved?
Citizen of big cities around the world are facing many problems these days as they are rapidly expanded, especially the youngsters. The following essay will point out some of the issues that these person are confronting as well as some potential recommendation which is helpful for improving the troubles.
Firstly, the costs of living in a big cities are increasing rapidly, which leads people, particularly young people, into struggling to adapt. A large proportion of the young citizens living in major cities are students with limited budget, some of them are unemployed and can not afford the high costs of basic living conditions such as housing, transport and food. Furthermore, many youngsters start new families at a very early stages, which put them into an even harder situation in terms of economy. In order to support these people, governments should take action in moving facilities like university, hospital, market, … to remote area. This will help reduce the demand for housing in large cities and therefore make it affordable for students that are undergraduates and for the workforce with low salary.
Secondly, poor mental health is another problems that many youngsters are dealing with in big cities nowadays. Students are facing overload study schedules, whilst the undergraduates struggle to compete in a competitive environment to clim the career ladder. These intangible pressure put young people under a lot of stress and lead to more serious health problems as a consequences. One possible solution is stress-relieving activities held by governments to help the youngsters, as well as create an awareness of mental stability amongst young people to improve their mindset.
In conclusion, although young people are facing many problems living in a major cities, there are still possible solutions mentioned above that could be obligate to help solving these issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
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Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'these people', 'these persons'?
Suggestion: this person; these people; these persons
... will point out some of the issues that these person are confronting as well as some potenti...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'city'?
Suggestion: city
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a consequence' or simply 'consequences'?
Suggestion: a consequence; consequences
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'city'?
Suggestion: city
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to solve' or 'solve'.
Suggestion: to solve; solve
...ed above that could be obligate to help solving these issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36454849498 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86594559311 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581939799331 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0138858761 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.666666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244729985495 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857396504582 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673207298395 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152704601089 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359639488757 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.