Last year you met someone on holiday and became friends He she has informed you that they will be travelling near to your home town on business in a few months time Write a letter to your friend inviting them to stay with you In your letter say how please

Dear Mathew,

It was a pleasant surprise to receive your letter yesterday. The happiness doubled when I learnt that you will be in Singapore in December with your wife for some professional reasons and have plans to stay a bit longer to wander around the city. I am quite excited to meet you and your wife and cordially welcome you to stay with us as long as you wish.

Our memory, together in Bali, Indonesia last year, is still fresh and I am happy to have the chance to meet you in a distant country. How daunting it would have been if someone so kind like you did not find the papers I lost! You were like an angel sent by God to save me from a disaster. The more I learned about you, the more attached I felt to you as a friend.

I live in an apartment located in the centre of Singapore city with my wife and have a spare room that you can use during your stay. My wife, Eugene, is equally excited to have you in our city. After you complete your professional works, we will visit some notable places like the Marina Bay Sands, Gardens by the Bay, Chinatown, Changi Chapel and Museum and enjoy local foods and movies.

I am looking forward to having you with us. Have a safe journey.

Warm wishes,

Adrian

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32467532468 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.213438159 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.53549629 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.25 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58333333333 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323366037878 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116122140381 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707549337221 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193864354756 0.12726935374 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808259681059 0.0580467560999 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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