The pie charts below show the percentage of kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972and 2012
In those years, animal’s welfare has become a subject of controversy; and it has been argued that beast should be free. On the other hand, there are a number of arguments assume that beast incarceration protects human.
On my opinion, animals are known for their loyalty and playful characteristics; therefore, they should be treated with respect and love. Consequently, zoos are useful for a plethora of reasons; it may be used as a home to endangered species; that’s why zoos act as a shelter for these animals. Zoos also may use as an educational tool; when families visit the zoo, they get to witness animals which may not be possible to view in their local region. It also can consider as an entertainment source due to going to a facility to look at animals for fun, seeing how trainers feed the animals and work with them. Zoos can be a local, national or international attraction that people want to see. The facilities create good-paying jobs, encourage entrepreneurs to be active in their community and provide indirect benefits to local businesses as well.
On the other hand, zoos are frequently viewed as cruel place for animals to live in. There are several explanations for this point of view. Firstly, imagine being caged, locked away from the outside word and living in closed, unfamiliar and unsanitary place for the rest of your life. These boxes prevent natural growth in animals since they cannot provide the same environment where they live. Secondly, when animals are born in captivity, they become dependent of humans that makes them slowly become inactive and attached to a man-made environment, consequently much so that they will either die alone in their prison or be unable to assimilate into their natural habitat again.
In short, zoos should only be used with the sole purpose of aiding in protecting and preserving endangered species. They should not be used as mere destinations for human entertainment. Instead of expanding zoos, we should focus on rebuilding the habitats people took away from them and illegalizing overhunting and locking up creature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In those years, animal’s welfare has bec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 5.60731707317 553% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 965.302439024 181% => OK
No of words: 347.0 196.424390244 177% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04610951009 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80480010638 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 106.607317073 193% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593659942363 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 283.868780488 196% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.129496209 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4375 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 40.7170731707 223% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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