The pie charts below show the percentage of kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972and 2012
The chart clarifies the proportion of many types of books which sold by sellers responsible for selling these books. This mentioned between the end of the last century till the beginning of the current century.
Overall, in 1972, the biggest number of the sold books was others types of books. In addition to that, in 1992, the first stander of sold books was the kind of adult fiction. While in 2012, sellers have sold the adult fiction books more than any type of books.
In 1972, the sale percentage of the travel books type was the lowest rate. It was less than 25 percent, and it remained the lowest sale percentage until 1992. At the beginning of 1992, these percentages have changed, but they did not change a lot. The most sold books were adult fiction books. This kind of books sold a quarter of the total.
In 2012, the proportion of selling fiction books has reached to lower than a half, and this sort of books took the first place over the rest of the genres. Whereas the percentage of biography books reduce in this year compared to previous years. Its sale ratio has amounted to 8 percent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, whereas, while, in addition, kind of, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64824120603 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19577865527 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502512562814 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2210510161 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1538461538 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262174548163 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1021277142 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546412978286 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162536023631 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291159859161 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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