A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks.
Currently, travel has been counted on as a premier source of income for numerous regions; however, whenever the managerial level is absent, undesirable consequences occur. This essay agrees that the tourism sector is one of the most crucial factors that play a vital role in generating a profit. In the following lines, both disadvantages and advantages will be illustrated, consequently supported by the reasons.
On the one hand, when it comes to demerits, the main reason why some nations cannot rely on tourism as their main source of revenue is increasing the tendency towards illegal immigration. To be explained, many visitors break up the visa duration because they seek to find a job opportunity rather than turn back to their home land. A prominent example is Italy, where the percentage of foreigners exceeds the percentage of original citizens. Hence, should the governmental sectors do not impose regulations, the country will be overpopulated, and unemployment will be raised as well.
On the other hand, it can be reiterated that some nations suffer from inflation and recession, such as developing countries, so they tend to flourish their income by exchanging foreign currency. In other words, during the accommodation, tourists spend money in order to purchase souvenirs or eat in restaurants along with visiting historical places for entertainment. For example, in Egypt, where many travellers pay hard currency, and that leads to provide vacancies for Egyptians. Thus, more and more human resources will be hired to cover their needs.
In conclusion, it is clear that the tourism sector has been contributing to the nation's prosperity and wealth, but authorities have to set rules to tackle the problems and eliminate drawbacks accordingly. As a result, after the merits and demerits have shown, I am convinced that the opportunities exceed the obstacles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, hence, however, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34006734007 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0390931247 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646464646465 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2149015205 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180701325193 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05135094873 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458151126591 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972007308448 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412917606926 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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