A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
Tourism in the modern world has become a significant contributor to the global economy, with many countries relying on it as a primary source of income. However, tourism has its advantages and disadvantages that need to be carefully considered and managed.
One of the advantages of tourism is its potential to stimulate economic growth. It creates job opportunities across various sectors, such as hospitality, transportation, and entertainment. Additionally, tourism generates revenue, which can boost local businesses and contribute to the overall development of a region. Moreover, it can encourage investment in infrastructure and services, benefiting both tourists and residents.
Another advantage of tourism is its ability to foster cultural exchange. Travelers have the opportunity to immerse themselves in different cultures, promoting tolerance and appreciation for diversity. This can lead to the preservation of local customs and heritage. Furthermore, tourism can facilitate the exchange of ideas and knowledge, contributing to global interconnectedness.
However, tourism also presents several disadvantages. One of the main concerns is over-tourism, where popular destinations become overcrowded, leading to issues such as increased pollution and strain on infrastructure. Additionally, tourism can lead to the commodification of local cultures, where traditions and practices are modified for commercial gain. This can result in the loss of authenticity and the erosion of cultural identity.
In my opinion, the advantages of tourism outweigh the disadvantages, but it is crucial to implement effective management strategies. Sustainable tourism practices should be adopted to ensure the long- term viability of destinations. This includes measures such as limiting visitor numbers and promoting responsible travel behavior. By striking a balance between economic growth and environmental and cultural preservation, tourism can continue to be a positive force in the world.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.07446808511 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58107749011 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.639732536 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353231890265 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102059103735 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691126715161 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196911032207 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068222298333 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.41 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.63 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.82 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.