A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed. What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
Tourism is the main factor contributing to the GDP of many regions. However, were it to be poorly managed, there would be a host of repercussions. From my perspective, although tourism in today’s life is a double-edged sword, its advantages do surpass the disadvantages. This essay will pen down both the negative and positive sides and provide valid support for my verdict.
On the one hand, travel might exert pernicious impacts on the environment, which is mainly attributed to the lack of awareness of tourists. For example, when going abroad to an unfamiliar nation, some travellers might feel free of the obligation to protect the natural habitat of indigenous flora and fauna as they consider preserving this area meaningless and non-profitable for them. However, this is not always the case. Thanks to educational tourism programs and strict regulations of local authorities, visitors could acquire more insights into their destinations and be willing to channel their efforts into protecting the environment for the sake of the whole society. Therefore, only to a minimal extent does tourism take a toll on the natural environment.
On the other hand, significant merits of economic and workforce development do outweigh the disadvantage mentioned above. Being one of the most potential industries in the modern world, tourism is now the decisive factor of economic development in many nations. Take Italy for instance, its revenue mostly stems from tourism, with a proportion of approximately 28%. Besides, tourism as a smoke-free industry has created millions of jobs for employees and contributed to accelerating the employment rates all over the globe.
In conclusion, as for the aforementioned explanations, although tourism brings about both merits and demerits, I concur that its profound beneficial effects on the economy and the labour market outweigh its manageable drawback on the environment.
- Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news However others believe that they can learn news better through other media Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- The government should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for a country s development and progress To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Many people say that cooking and eating healthily is better for individuals health than consuming ready meals To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 89
- Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside Others believe that there are health benefits of living in cities Discuss both views and give your opinions 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46644295302 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13486944276 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627516778523 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6925818196 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.357142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195742594758 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670204353578 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523877198899 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115520391552 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458512688844 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.