In some countries, more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
In recent years, the rise of adults who are still living with their parents have been contributing to economic upheaval. Whereas some people argue that this trend helps forge stronger bonds between family members, I strongly believe that it is more disadvantageous due to the dependence of children on their parents.
On the one hand, living under the same roof with parents helps cement relationships between family members. Primarily, children have abundant opportunities for face-to-face communication. For instance, after graduating, children could share their experience at the workplace to receive advice from parents. Consequently, this helps children improve their self-confidence and make right decisions but sometimes parents put their own viewpoint that is probably inappropriate in the modern world on the children. It would not happen if children are settling down in other places and mainly contacting their parents over phone calls.
On the other hand, continuing to live with parents causes detrimental effects on enhancing self-reliance skill, which is the minimum requirement for success in the highly crowded and competitive business world. The most obvious reason is that children are likely to be exempt from mundane tasks such as doing laundry, cleaning rooms and preparing meals. Therefore, children could not be aware of the importance of self-discipline and self-dependence that could lead to personal and career success. Obviously, children who are early earning their own life separately perform better in adapting in a new environment than the others.
In conclusion, despite the benefits of living with parents, after graduating, there is not a wise path towards becoming a successful and well-adjusted person. In my opinion, children should be fully aware of the responsibility for their lives at the age of 18.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54964539007 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05874652189 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624113475177 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0495058269 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.384615385 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195100213567 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708653686499 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047984439155 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129088369479 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050083262256 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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