An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shop online?
Along with the development of technology combined with various types of services, online shopping is now becoming more and more popular. Despite the fact that buying things online has many benefits, there are still some drawbacks that this kind of service affects both individuals and companies.
On the one hand, customers and companies are taking a lot of advantages from online purchases. First of all, instead of spending time deciding which stores to go and what clothes to wear when going out, people only need to search for products on the online shopping applications or websites such as Amazon, Shoppe, Lazada and so on. Various results will immediately appear on the screen and let the buyers choose for the one they are most satisfied with. An extraordinary feature that only cybershopping can provide to customers is coupons. The main purpose of these discounts is to reduce the price of the products or the price of shipping fees; which is a great opportunity for buyers to save their buying cost. Furthermore, companies can also cooperate with online shopping sites to promote their products to customers. Especially with the product review feature of the sites, companies will receive evaluations from customers in order to know the strengths and weaknesses of the products, thereby improving product quality.
On the other hand, there are some certain downsides of e-commerce that need to be mentioned. In terms of buyers, they only can evaluate the goods they intend to buy through images and information that sellers provide. Sometimes, in order to sell items, sellers might give false information about goods or take pictures from famous brands to deceive the customers. Individuals may suffer from financial loss and could not get it back. In terms of businesses, there are possibilities that they will encounter individuals who buy their products for joking purposes. When the goods are sent to the buyer, they refuse to accept the order; which costs the seller not only money but also order processing time.
In conclusion, online shopping has made people’s lives easier because of time-saving and more choices at lower prices. In contrast, fraud through the internet also brings inconveniences to both individuals and companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, may, so, still, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23966942149 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71427182003 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564738292011 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8906964591 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.882352941 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3529411765 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299086134752 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821637289324 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540263267681 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162420527528 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433566130018 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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