Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both and give your own opinion.
Currently, the opinions about the main environmental problems are divided, some think the loss of special plants and animals is, while another say there more significant problems.
On the one hand, those put plants and animals at the decisive position consider that the ecosystem has been damaged as the extinction of them. For example, if a predator in a region dies out, their hunting aims seem have no enemy, which impetuses the increase of their population. For the same reason, without the threats of wolves, sheep become no longer active and their unhealthy index dumps rapidly. And finally people find that the mortality of sheep live in worry-free environment is even higher than that of sheep under the threats of enemies. The rule is suitable for plants too, if one species of plant disappears, the remaining species suffer substantially. So with the graduate extinction of plants and animals, our ecosystem is under a big risk and need us to pay attentions on.
On the other hand, advocates of the second idea claim that there are a range of problems on environments deserve to be worried. The green house situation, rising sea level and the big hole of ozone layer is what happened to our world these years as the emission of CO2 from human's megacities. Based on my knowledge, the japan will disappear in the near future if things go smoothly like the prediction. What is more, with the expansion of cities, the shortage of foods demands to change the habitats of plants or animals to the cultivation land which has extended to further inland. So this can explain why they think there are many more problems.
From my point of view, I suppose we shouldn’t focus on one or two problems, but need to focus on the whole situation. And we have to find out the cause of these problems in order to overcome it from the origins.
In conclusion, environmental problems are sever recently, if we want to know the main problem, we should analyse the worst results of the problems. However, I don’t think there are some not significant environmental problems as they are closely connected to our own survivals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, second, so, while, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, on the whole, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86225895317 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67113949952 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570247933884 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8314064867 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.3125 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274879807605 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769352083913 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952253561473 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164290879892 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12551314175 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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