Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is true that people are tend to move to another country to pursue a master degree or earning money to afford for their life. I agree that living in a country that do not use mother tounge might create some both social and practical problems.
On the one hand, misundestanding in conversation can lead to serious problems. People live in other nation and they must speak foreign language when they have not clearly understood the original and meaning of that words, they will use wrong word in wrong place. If people speak anything that unsuitable in a country with many opposing factions, it might be caused the debates and even fight between that factions. For example, in American, there is still exist racial discrimination in somewhere between white-skin man and color-skin man, if someone do not careful in their sentences, they might be cause the misunderstanding between them and lead to a unexpected results.
On the orther hand, speaking a foreign language with people move from other country might be cause some issues in daily life. When living in a new country, people will be challenged when using foreign language to express their demand or feelling, hence it will leat to some troubles with their life such as order food or asking for help when they get lost. For example, if students moves to onther nation to pursue a high degree cannot interact with native speak, they will find difficult in understanding the lecture or making new friends. Therefore, the will take longer time to adapt a new life.
In conclusion, people must use foreign language when living in new country might be a challenge for them and it will cause some problems in society and their daily life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 456, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...or example, in American, there is still exist racial discrimination in somewhere betw...
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Line 3, column 551, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...skin man and color-skin man, if someone do not careful in their sentences, they mi...
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Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: BE_CAUSE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'because'?
Suggestion: because
... careful in their sentences, they might be cause the misunderstanding between them and l...
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Line 3, column 652, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...sunderstanding between them and lead to a unexpected results. On the orther hand...
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Line 3, column 665, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'result'?
Suggestion: result
...g between them and lead to a unexpected results. On the orther hand, speaking a foreig...
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Line 4, column 91, Rule ID: BE_CAUSE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'because'?
Suggestion: because
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85517241379 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54658382535 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513793103448 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.7460957143 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190721933655 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825087592729 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568500269231 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132798880195 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188713368855 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.