The picture below shows how a hot balloon works. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The given figure provides the information of the structure and the operating process of a hot baloon.
From an overall perspective, there are nine parts to create one hot baloon and running system based on hot and cool air.
According to the data in the image, the main part of hydrogen balloon is an envelop which contains many detail. Following that, on the top of the balloon-shaped air craft, the first part is parachute vavle. Next, the line surrounding the body of an envelope called gores with a range of panels which covered by plastic mambrance. Below this part is the skirt which has a rectangular shape and attach with two ropes. Subsequently, the bruner and propane cyclinder link with the rope. Finally is the basket which usually carry passengers.
Moving to this running system, parachute vavle play a role as a self-sealing flap that allows hot air to escape a controlled rate. Followed that, the burner and propane cylinder mix propane with air ro produce flame to make the hot air. Inside this air balloon, the cool air is transfer from outside to inside. Thanks to the flame in this air balloon, this air become hotter and create a light to push hydrogen in an air-balloon in order to fly up in the sky.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e, the main part of hydrogen balloon is an envelop which contains many detail. Following t...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun detail seems to be countable; consider using: 'many details'.
Suggestion: many details
...en balloon is an envelop which contains many detail. Following that, on the top of the ball...
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Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...d propane cyclinder link with the rope. Finally is the basket which usually carry passe...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73023255814 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54924457787 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576744186047 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7467547356 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.75 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 5.23603664747 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107811721014 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426777222852 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315819519245 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749089020883 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167501079371 0.0819641961636 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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