the chart below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts demonstrate the proportion of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar being consumed by Americans in their four daily servings.
Overall, it is clear that dinner accounts for the highest amounts of nutrients apart from added sugar while this nutrient has the highest proportion in the snacks category. Meanwhile, breakfast has the lowest proportion in all nutrients which could be depicted as the healthiest serving comparing to others.
Concerning dinner, the highest level of nutrients in this meal is sodium at 43% while the noticeable remaining proportions are 37% and 23% in saturated fat and added sugar, respectively.
This meal can be followed by lunch in terms of highly nutrients level as it allocates more than one-fourth of total proportion in sodium and saturated fat.
On the contrary, breakfast has relatively the same proportion as 16% in all three charts, making it the healthiest meal in comparison with other options. Likewise, breakfast and snacks both stand at exactly 14% in sodium although the snacks' added sugar is transparently
high at 42%. Another noticeable proportion in saturated fat at 21% is also for snacks that Americans get used to intake .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: snacks'; snack's
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: .
...snacks that Americans get used to intake .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, likewise, so, while, apart from, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27748691099 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83272052196 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565445026178 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.3770052616 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 126.0 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107448122546 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568889959351 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456229423248 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582260067238 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324043617531 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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