Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays with the help of modern technology, many profit-operations are more likely to have meetings, discussions and training on the internet. In my opinion, I believe that the merits of this change outweigh the drawbacks.
It is undeniable that using an online platform is still having a bad effect on instructing new employees or having a meeting. Due to lack of facial expression and face to face interactions, people easily get off track and misunderstand. During a meeting or a training online, it is difficult for people to fully concentrate on what the speakers or the instructors are saying when there are a bunch of distractions popping up like facebook, youtube, email or messenger notifications. As a result, they get distracted and lose their effectiveness and focusness during the training or meeting.
However, the disadvantages may seem minor to the merits which could benefit the businesses for a long term. This is because they can reduce a huge amount of cost for their company when all of their business activities are operating online. In fact, many companies like facebook and google are interviewing their candidates everyday through screen and this helps them to lower the expenses for rental accomodation. Moreover, this also helps people to save time when participating in the training and meeting at any time they feel comfortable, thus, there is no need for them to commute a long distance to the company.
In conclusion, although there are some drawbacks to having meetings or training online such as distractions and misunderstandings, its merits could bring a significantly positive impact on the companies like reducing cost and saving time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'bunches'?
Suggestion: bunches
...instructors are saying when there are a bunch of distractions popping up like faceboo...
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Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ies like reducing cost and saving time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24074074074 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17243139999 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3997864236 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.636363636 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146174952544 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529612892713 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355158397388 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917054891748 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258932480152 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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