Tasks 2: As major cities in the world are growing today, so do their problems. What are the problems for young people who are living in the cities as the result of continued growth? What are the solutions for these problems?
It is argued that nowadays there is a growing of main cities and their problems are growing as well. In my opinion, I believe that growing cities have caused problems for young adults living in cities and I will give out some possible solutions for these issues in this essay.
On the one hand, there are several problems caused for youngsters living in the cities as the result of continued growth. Firstly, there will be a more polluted atmosphere when a major cities are growing, this will affect the young people’s health a lot. For example, Ho Chi Minh City is a growing city, but by using more private transport, the air here becomes very polluted, so young people who live in Ho Chi Minh City often have their health affected. Overall, the growth of many main cities will also cause many problems for young people living in these cities.
On the other hand, I will give some ways to help solve these problems. To begin with, the government can encourage residents to use more public transports than private transport. This will help decrease the rate of polluted atmosphere and make the a health of young people become better. For instance, Switzerland is one of the clean nations all over the world because most of the citizens here use a environmentally-friendly vehicles such as buses or bicycles, which makes the polluted atmosphere here decreased. In addition, the government can make more free accommodations for young people, this will help them reduce accommodation costs.
In conclusion, although there are many problems that affected a lot of young people who are living in the cities, I have given some solutions to solve that problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'city'?
Suggestion: city
...a more polluted atmosphere when a major cities are growing, this will affect the young...
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Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...he rate of polluted atmosphere and make the a health of young people become better. F...
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Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...d because most of the citizens here use a environmentally-friendly vehicles such ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90425531915 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71690686597 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507092198582 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3765009346 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.25 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418515018866 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169638702368 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129034782396 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288558658298 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13859436188 0.056905535591 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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