Some people believe that violent media directly result in violent behavior. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A vast majority of people believes that violent movies, films and videos lead to aggressive behavior. In my opinion, I agree with this viewpoint and this essay will provide the reasons.
Firstly, a certain type of media affects the youth behavior aggressively. Due to the development of technology, more and more videos games are produced. Besides, while some games contain brutal content such as murdering, killing and shooting scenes which is highly attractive to users, people especially the youth might get addicted to this kind of games. Therefore, those actions may not only change young people attitude and thought after playing for a long time, but also, they might act aggressively toward family and friends in real life. For example, a murder had been occurred in a high school in which a student used a weapon to get rid of his noisy friend. Instead of having a conversation, he imitated an action in a shooting video game to solve the problem.
Secondly, some kind of films have a negative impact on citizens behavior. Although the producer has marked a warning of ages which suitable for the movie, young people who are not enough ages still approach the film in some ways. Therefore, their awareness is not developed as normal as their peer which might lead to some changes in action and awareness. For instance, a violent film series called “Squid game “was released in 2021 and it received a negative reaction especially from parents. Moreover, after watching it, some youth intend to do the same things in real life. Therefore, a number of people started to kill each other due to this movie.
To sum up, I believe that the person’s actions are highly dependent on how they behave to negative online content since it is appeared mostly on the internet. For that reason, government should pay more attention on this problem in order to have a better future for citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92523364486 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54428846453 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595015576324 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3838999479 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6875 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157281463352 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516094204507 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548766042976 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099904233518 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629130241327 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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