We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology.
How do you think it will change in the future?
Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?
Nowadays, computers have become an integral part of our life, which we practically can not imagine how life will be without them. Over recent years, their use and potential have grown at an incredible rate and I strongly believe that this trend will continue as more innovative ways to use them are developed. Although there are certainly some downsides to their use, I do believe the positives are dominant than the negatives.
To begin with, the advancement in computers plays a great role in taking the world to a higher level. To clarify, initially, modern technology helps us with work requiring precision and may save a space of time. Computers perform any calculations regardless of the complication in just a minute but currently, all the mathematics can be solved in a few microseconds. With the passage of time, the advancement in computer technology compact each and everything around us. Furthermore, in the future, humans can complete any task within seconds because various machines are invented. It is not only limited to this, scientists now can use AR technology in order to invent modern robots to help people with basic work in life.
Despite this, there are dangers in relying so quite heavily on computers. So much of our daily life is controlled by them, that means without them, modern day life as we know it is impossible. Computers link us to the Internet and thus provide us with information and knowledge. As a result, it makes us too dependable and we are less likely to think logically. For instance, students can search all the answers for their homework and tests at school by using Google and it will have a negative impact on their memory and thinking abilities due to the fact that information is already provided and we take it for granted.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that computers give us numerous benefits and in the future, our life will improve as technology improves because we will probably become more dependent on them. However, even if those prospects are extremely appealing to us, we should remain responsible and never use them too much.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92372881356 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75329260925 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587570621469 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0732687548 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.9375 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291224569344 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907110900902 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602574835036 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176244815577 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637831399591 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.