leaders like john f. Kennedy and martin Luther king have made important contributions to the people of the united states. name another world leader you think is important.
By exploring the world's history, we observe a lot of leaders who have an effective role in individuals' life. Some leaders are known as good ones because of their positive effects, they love human beings and try to do their best for humanity, but some are known as bad leaders because of their destructive effects such as starting wars and killing people. In my opinion, Gandhi is one of the most important and influential leaders in a good way. I have this idea because of a couple of reasons.
First of all, he changed Indian people's lives in a better way. Indian's beliefs, way of thinking, and general lifestyle changed. Before Gandhi, Indian society was living in poverty. They were suffering from severe class differences; some were so rich, but many Indian families were living in extreme poverty without knowing their rights. Gandhi informed them about their rights, and learnt them that all human beings are the same and have equal rights. After that they found out that they have to defend their rights as a result, Gandhi improved the living condition of Indians.
Additionally, Gandhi became a role model. After the success of Indians in taking back their rights, people worldwide found out that they can defend their rights too, and despite the power and influence of their rivals, they can wine like Indian poor society. So Gandhi could change poor people's minds in the world.
To sum up, Gandhi is one of the most influential leaders who made the world a better place because of his influence not only on Indian society but also all over the world. Great leader like him are sadly absent these days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 279.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8064516129 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26498909807 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562724014337 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5594828055 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143377479558 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539462677019 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049511354068 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100316197685 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601860361961 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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