The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least150 words.
The line graph depicts data about how many stores closed and how many new stores opened across a typical nation over a period of seven years, starting in 2011.
In general, the common trend in this graph was downward. In addition, except for the first half of 2011 and a period of two years from 2014 to 2016, the number of shops closed outnumbered the number of new shops opened.
Looking at the graph, we can see that from 2011 to 2014, the number of stores closed fluctuated between 6000 and 7000. After that, this figure plunged to 500 in 2015 before surging to 5200 in the following year. For the remaining time, this figure had a slight fluctuation between 5000 and 5200.
In terms of the number of new stores opened, it peaked at 8,500 in the first year of the period. And then this declined sharply to 4000. From 2012 to 2014, this figure climbed significantly to 6000 in 2014 before decreasing dramatically to 2012’s figure in 2015. This figure remained stable until 2017 before dropping again to 3000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...eriod of seven years, starting in 2011. In general, the common trend in this gra...
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...til 2017 before dropping again to 3000.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, then, except for, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62983425414 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23226299458 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563535911602 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.198086688 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182925258153 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713088863484 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848525054369 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123284883624 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070069854432 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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