Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
First, with regards to using electronic devices, looking at a computer or television screen for a long time might affect negatively to children’s eyes. Scientists have pointed out that if children spend most of the time in a day on those technologies, it might be easily for them to suffer from short-sighted . Therefore, youngster needs to put on glasses which may prevent them on participating certain sports, especially when it comes to professional. Not only that, those devices might reduce the speed and accuracy in responding of children’s brain. For instance, a boy who play video games everyday tend to response to a question slower than a normal person. Therefore , allowing children to use those technologies with any rules might leave consequences.
Next, nowadays reading books is beneficial . To explain/To be more specific, since books provide children knowledge about most of things in the world such as animals, economic, education, scholarship, hence nearly every successful businessman suggest youngster to read book every day. Besides, not only is it a good habit for young people, but it also teaches us many lessons in our life such as how to be passion or how to take care of book properly. Therefore, books will shape children’s personality not only at the moment but also for the future above. Because of that, parents should encourage their kids to read books on a daily basis.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, look, may, so, therefore, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13043478261 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92428098106 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678260869565 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6626636951 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.272727273 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185482769027 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686145955575 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357589941808 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134955689376 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00733245296034 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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