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Children are happier than adults

With the booming of the economy, education has been seen as the solid foundation for each country. Fierce competition has been filled in every industry and has caused much pressure to every person or family. Therefore, some people argue that children are happier than adults, but these teenagers do not agree with them. As far as I am concerned, children are more happier than adults because children do not need to consider about sustaining a family, and they have more methods for fun than before.

Studying pressure is the only pressure source for each child. Exactly, after the development of technology and science, every family starts to focus on their children’s study, hoping they could have a better life in the future by forcing them to take a series of extra courses after school. However, most parents also understand the balance between study and the relax, thus, children just keeps eyes on study, which is enough for the parent’s eager. Moreover, children could choose to give up one choice for another whenever the time, parents always are their shield and help them forever. But as an adult who has responsibility, he/she has to insist to work for building a family, there are more pressure for them, but persisting is the only choice for each adult.

Comparing to a few decades ago, children have more ways for fun after the increment of the electronic instruments. Sony and Nintendo as the most famous electronic company in the world produces a series of superior games for children, which is not a authority just for these riches family. Otherwise, school also sets all kinds of physical courses for children’s healthy by gathering them to play football or basketball. For example, I always remember the happiest time that playing basketball with my friends after class, this time not only just help us have a strong body, but also built a deep friendship.

Consequently, children are happier than adults, because they do not worry about their food, and just focus on their concerned. Moreover, more and more relaxing methods have come in this world.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 360, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
... As far as I am concerned, children are more happier than adults because children do not nee...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nderstand the balance between study and the relax, thus, children just keeps eyes on stud...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...perior games for children, which is not a authority just for these riches family....
^
Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'riches'' or 'rich's'?
Suggestion: riches'; rich's
...which is not a authority just for these riches family. Otherwise, school also sets all...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5333617559 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543103448276 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.390845871 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269534539938 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939069179198 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118984594048 0.0737576698707 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184415086945 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110017551753 0.0645574589148 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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