In the future, a majority of people will work from home
With the rapid development of science and technology, people's lifestyle has totally made huge changes in modern society. Some people consider that most people will work from home because of electrical deployment improvements, however, others argue that people will still work together. In my opinion, many people will start the remote working, there are 2 opinions have been provided as below.
Firstly, it is convenient that work without any commutes. As we know, a lot of big cities have more job opportunities, which also represents people would like to move to them for better life and future. Therefore, the large population causes every employee to suffer traffic pressure, waking up early and wasting time on the road. However, all kinds of communication tools have been developed in this boom of technology, each person could start their working status faster than before. For example, Since the influence of Covid-19, so many companies started to turn their working mode to remote, it is so surprising that they got better benefits and higher income than before.
Secondly, working together with the help of the Internet could attract more talents to the company. Compared to a few years ago, some the companies were limited by the region, which does not have so much development in economy and finance, these talents would like to famous companies for a better job or career. However, any company could deploy strong communication technology to connect them together from different states or provinces. Here is my friend's experience as an example, after graduating, he started his remote working for a Los Angeles Data Science company, but he still lived in a small town in Massachusetts, and do not need any move, which is so convenient.
Consequently, I agree with the claim that remote working will be the main method due to it could provide many conveniences for workers and the company. Moreover, it also could bring many talents from different places together via the Internet and make more improvements for each company.
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- Children are happier than adults 70
- Some people marry shortly after finishing college Others prefer to focus on their careers first and wait until later to get married Which of these situations do you think is better 76
- When choosing a job it is more important to like the job than to make a certain amount of money 76
- Children are happier than adults 76
- Some people marry shortly after finishing college Others prefer to focus on their careers first and wait until later to get married Which of these situations do you think is better 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15315315315 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69405356132 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591591591592 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5623273675 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.571428571 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 5.45110844103 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227313084358 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809092692371 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109537303265 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154086503191 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129565361034 0.0645574589148 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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