Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Climate change is one of the most serious environment problems people facing, however some argue that we should accept it instead of take immediate actions to mitimate it. Personally, I completly disagree with this view.
There are several effective measures that government and individuals could take to curb climate chang. All of countries should cooperate to reach agreements and set international standards for environmental protections, which means these nations guarantee that they take part in environmental protections. The government also should introduce laws to limit carbon dioxide emissions by imposing more taxes on companies which discharge toxic pollutans into the environment. In terms of individuals, we should use environmental-friendly products and avoid ultilize throw-away items such as toilet papers, plastic straws and plastic containers. Moreover, the public could affect the action of governments by voting for pollitants who concern about enviromental problems instead of ignore it.
If people choose to live with climate change, I believe consequences will be extremely disastrous. Climate change is likely to contribute to natural disasters that happend erraticly and take a heavy toll on people’s lives. For example, I am not optimistic that we would be able to cope with even a small rise of sea levels. Millions of peole would be displaced by flooding, particularly in countries that do not have the means to safeguard low-lying areas. These peole in these countries would be forced to migrate to nearby cities or other nations. The potential for human suffering would be huge, and it is likely the we would see outbreaks of diseases, famine, increased homlessness and poverty.
In conclusion, it is clear to me that we should tacke the issue of climate change, and I disagree with those who argue that we could find a way to live with it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 617, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'we'?
Suggestion: the; we
...ffering would be huge, and it is likely the we would see outbreaks of diseases, famine...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35472972973 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05827970939 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608108108108 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4798450259 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.214285714 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224922096502 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764959317464 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766337101938 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163154467189 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861632276604 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.