Nowadays, people depend on technology in their free time.
The modern world has witnessed a surging reliance on electronic devices in leisure times. I believe this propensity is associated with intense negativity, and this essay will show how the technology’s dependency is a negative development.
The first reason to account for the negativity of this phenomenon is that it plunges the masses into a sedentary lifestyle. There is no denying that the amount of physical movement involves in the use of technology is relatively low. Moreover, although some of them realize this consequence, they are still unwilling to do exercises as they can not resist the allure of social media applications. In light of this, people who are physically passive would find it tough to sustain their fitness and health levels. It is evident that the escalating usage of modern devices is synonymous with the prevalence of people who suffer physical-related health issues.
Moreover, as people become more and more dependent on technology in their free time, they would incur the deterioration of social relationships. People who allocate the majority of their leisure time to technology often find themselves in socially isolated circumstances whenever they meet others. Such isolation breeds the repercussion that people gradually withdraw from social situations and give up on all socializing efforts. This practice directly affects their’s relationship qualities which spells trouble for their mental health.
To conclude, depending on technology for entertainment in leisure time is not a positive development; in fact, it leads people to an unhealthy lifestyle and takes a heavy toll on human social relationships and mental health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: YOUR_S[1]
Message: Did you mean 'their' or 'theirs'?
Suggestion: their; theirs
...efforts. This practice directly affects their’s relationship qualities which spells tro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, still, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53307392996 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11400270132 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614785992218 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2368395008 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311907562586 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108199535884 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109854862795 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180770547065 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109712969802 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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