“A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer.”
school curriculum would be easy form manipulation if all the students in the nation are offering the same for some number of the period before diverging into the area of their field of studies.l mostly agree with the prompt with the following three recommendations.
First and foremost, the national curriculum is unique throughout the nation and would definitely help the government and other accademic boards in thier decision-making process. Since nation curriculums are the same throughout, it implies that their activities such as syllabus , end of semester exam games activities would be homogeneous in all the school so the accademic board would just use one stone to solve most of these issues if not all.For instance, plan that is made for school B would be extended to school A which make the whole activities work smoothly.
Furthermore, it will lead to reduction in the government expenditure expecilly in the purview of the education sector.Since the same pan apply to all the nation in the nation , the government will set a structure or method that would be carried that decisions throughout the nation. Herein the reduction, the worker will be fewer as the procedure is uniform.
Equally important, in the aspect of the student, will facilitate learning as a student can get explanations of a particular topic in different school likewise their note deep understanding of the concepts.
Moreover, moblity of students from one school to another school is highly possible as there would not be any severe interruption in the students curriculum. For example, a student whose parent is moving from Greater Accra in Ghana to Kumasi for permanent settlement have no issues with their student's learning as the curriculum is homogeneous throughout the nations
In a gist, a nation using the same curriculum throughout the nations would be impressive based on the aforementioned points.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 305.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27540983607 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00515036398 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537704918033 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.6084953077 60.3974514979 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 201.125 118.986275619 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.125 23.4991977007 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.21951772744 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281670672385 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133153587611 0.0831039109588 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634822801657 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162189382264 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430438694178 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 14.1392134831 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 48.8420337079 67% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 12.1743820225 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.8971910112 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 11.7820224719 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.