Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger.
Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
Over the latest years, adults have been deciding to start a family later in life, commonly after thirties. Personally, I completely agree that this trend will benefit the society. And this essay below will discuss and explain more about my points of view.
To begin with the stating, that late marriage will also be detrimental to the education of the society, because many children those who were born when their parents may not be after the thirties; they can be more intelligent than the ones born earlier. Based on scientific facts, their brains will not function quickly and cannot catch up with their friends. Beside that, the young people who marry earlier, seem they are not mature enough, which means many people who rely on the mainstream values of the society and the opinions of their parents as the basic, do not have the capability to think independently. As a result, the number of young couples would increase in divorce. Many children do not have a fullfill childhood.
On the contrary, many people believe that money is the key to a cozy family. When an individual’s economic and educational levels are enough to support a family, mothers and fathers would be able to develop their careers and have higher wages, so the kids could join in private schools as well as in extra supports. If people choose to have a late marriage, people would live the fullest, and be ready for a serious relationship. Hence, people will have a long period time devoting to their careers and squandering their own money in preferences.
In conclusion, I totally agree that the idea of rearing a family at the thirties will have a wide range of advantages. Due to the fact that the certain couples would not only would be more financially stable, but also get more mature enough to secure and maintain a long-lasting and full happiness in their own family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.809375 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54519883494 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1098263805 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.928571429 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311094013781 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100152207107 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598221633063 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165181688104 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394584705972 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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