Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
In my opinion, I can not deny that playing games are an indispensable thing in our life and especially for children. Some people said that playing game is not only not dangerous but also can bring many benefits for educating children, while other believe it has a negative impact on people. In this essay, I will present the advantages and disadvantages of games. However, I agree with the side that believe that game can bring a bad impact.
Firstly, those entertainment games can increase analytical and creative skills for people. For instance, spend time creating games, making designs or even managing new inventions. These processes motivate individuals to use their own minds. As my view, they can learn a lot more information from playing games or even increase their knowledge. Moreover, one of the greatest advantages is practicing work using maximize imagination.
Secondly, a lot of children focus on playing, finishing tasks or upgrading level through the games worse than that spend hours each day trying to finish progress without doing homework, led to many consequences. For example, having lacking sleep, and over-playing the games possibly lead to severe myopia. Furthermore, they will lose interactive communication relationships, fall in virtural world, and they forget responsobilities that have to complete. Based on this compelling evidence, it appears that video games have a big influence on children's routine not only in school, work and but also in their body health even their lives.
In conclusion, video games have many benefits such as improvement in learning ability and entertainment. Contrastlty, the disadvantage of the games is really bad and can cause fatal mind on children
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33823529412 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98256721298 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632352941176 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9573431829 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9333333333 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293090229405 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912401363896 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681688239134 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177683119657 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043404944628 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.