Some countries are struggling with an increase in crime rates. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, severals countries in the current contemporay world are struggling with crime rate issues. A majority of inhabitants believe that the governments need to increase the density of police and security grauds on the is the only way to reduce the amount of offenders. From my perspective, i bielieve that the above solution is not the only way to solve crime issues and the further essay will give the reasons to my opinion.
On the one hand, a increasing number of police will have a negative impact on the mind of citizens. For instance, the individuals will have a psychological fear and feel unsafe if the surrounding environment is full of people who have weapons and strength. As a result, citizens cannot do their daily activities freely and always have a Moreover, hire a large amount of police will have a substantial impact on the government fortune. As far as i am concerned, the society will need at least 200 dollars per month in order to hire a police who have minimum qualifications and knowledge of the law. Hence, having more police not only minimize the inhabitants freedom but also play a essential role in deceease the country’s finaces
On the other hand, there are other better solutions that can deal with offenders. In particularly, governments can use many modern and futuristic techonogies such as securities cameras and ID cards with chips for locating inhabitants. Thus,these technologies are not only have a low price but it will have a negligible impact on the citizens' life. Furthermore, school and parents can level up the youngster’s awareness of crime prevention. In general, a teenagers who have proper education and a ginormous knowledge about illegal activities will never commit crime and could be a good citizens in the future
In conclusion, increase the amount of police is not the significant way to deal with the increasing crime rate. What is important is raise people’s awareness of crime prevention and create a security environment for inhabitants. Otherwise in the near future, the offenders will rise higher and not only the country's security but also the country’s industrialization and modernization will be impacted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, at least, for instance, in conclusion, in general, in particular, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10335195531 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06371613293 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522346368715 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2667147644 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319670932076 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107608834626 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571116127493 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204855249505 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612920754971 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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