Nowadays people have cosmetic surgery to improve life. Why do many more people choose these operations? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Being beautiful and handsome is becoming a great concern to many people these days. Some people has selected cosmetic surgery as a way to improve their appearance. In my opinion, this trend has many benefits on individuals as well as society as a whole.
There are three main merits associated with people who undertake plastic surgery. The first positive impact is that it gives them a sense of fulfillment. By taking the surgery, people who once feel shameful and insercure due to their look would become more self-confident. Additionally, better look also opens up many employment opportunities for individuals. Given their enhanced appearance, people tend to be recruited by employers over other job seekers. This stems from the fact that people who have better look are likely to receive more favor than the ordinary. Thus, their rate of landing a job is higher. Likewise, it is easy for beautiful people to broaden their social circle. As people in general, have a tendency to choose those who are good-looking to establish platonic or intimate relationships. If people opt for plastic surgery, their living standard could be enhanced and they would feel happier.
In addition to effects upon individual’s mental health and career progression, there are also merits for their community if people decide to take cosmetic surgery. First, the operation often charges a great deal of money. Because of this, the business therefore make a great contribution for the tax system which can be used to fund other priorities of society and benefit the public. Another benefit is that the cosmetic surgery, as an industry, creates more job opportunites for local medical workers which lowers the rate of unemployment and provides employees with decent income. That is why the treatment to upgrade beauty of people has close relevance to the development of local economy.
In sum, plastic surgery provides person with a wide range of benefits and stimulates the growth of local community. I believe that the phenomenon bring
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...health and career progression, there are also merits for their community if peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, likewise, look, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in general, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17073170732 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79392745728 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5404539681 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242543304978 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720293287073 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527616148331 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139493148251 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763344756508 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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