In the past several decades, the world has gone through enormous changes on both a societal and an individual level. At the same time, there are some social rules that never change, regardless of the transformation in the external environment. One of them is courtesy. Even in this high-paced society, offensive and impolite behaviors are never acceptable.
To begin with, during class, there are no reasons for teachers to talk disrespectfully toward their students, even though they may make some obvious mistakes. Being friendly to students can bring people closer since this will form an emotional bond and trust between them. Students will feel that they are respected and more likely to focus on the lecture in this relaxed atmosphere. When the teacher is polite, students are more possibly to accept their teacher’s advice or even criticism. All of these contribute to students’ academic careers.
Moreover, office workers also should perform properly in their workplace. As a worker who is always busy entertaining clients or dealing with their superiors and colleagues, politeness is necessary and a precondition in order to make the work smooth. Especially in some service businesses, courtesy service is the bedrock on which a company stands. They may easily lose their public praise because of one server’s gaffe and will be buried among countless competing companies. Obviously, if a person wants to succeed in his/her career, politeness will never be outdated.
Admittedly, some believe that speaking frankly is acceptable when they are out for a good purpose. For example, suppose one professor makes a mistake when she is lecturing. In that case, a student can interrupt the lecture and point out that since it can serve as a reminder that teachers are not the perfect embodiment of knowledge and help the teacher realize their own weaknesses. Nevertheless, this interruption will destroy the atmosphere of the study and make others feel disrespected.
In a nutshell, politeness is a prerequisite for people to have a satisfying life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, frankly, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30182926829 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90760806113 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612804878049 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1383720019 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5263157895 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2631578947 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0786013157099 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0198624931798 0.076458572812 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364809946291 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0332800725795 0.150856017488 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301767314894 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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