Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have differing views about whether or not children should be taught at school or at home. Recently, this phenomenon has been brought to public attention with people standing on two different sides.
On the one hand, proponents of the idea that parents had better educate their children on how to become decent citizens tend to point out a combination of reasons. First and foremost, parents are very close with their children, which means that they can understand and share lots of things with their sons and daughters. As a result, children will feel more comfortable when studying with their parents. Another compelling reason is that parents’ behaviors have a big impact on children’s thoughts, so they will be the best model for children to follow. An illustration is that if a mother spends much time on work, her son will take more time to study instead of playing games.
On the other hand, I advocate for those who believe that school is the best place for children to learn this. The primary rationale is that textbooks can provide children with a huge amount of helpful knowledge that they can use to deal with plenty of issues. For instance, it can guide children on how to solve a math problem or explain to them why it rains. Furthermore, it is widely known that children spend more time at school than at their home. Consequently, teachers play a vital role in guilting children into learning many essential skills. They can also give children suitable advice and suggestions to study better. Besides, schools can also bring children a good environment to have comprehensive development. This is because children study with their friends at school, which gives them more motivation in learning.
In conclusion, both sides are justifiable. However, on balance, I believe that school possesses an important role in children’s development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
People have differing views about whether or not children should be taught at school or ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04854368932 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71090416135 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592233009709 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9080565303 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7647058824 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220189365692 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762110458255 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050377073877 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136839610184 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363409329621 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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