In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driver'ss. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.
do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
In the modern era, There will all vehicles run in an automatic mode. The people who will travel inside the car only will be passengers, not drivers. As far as I am concerned the disadvantages are overlapping the advantages. I will discuss this in the upcoming paragraphs.
On the other hand, There will be one advantage of driverless vehicles. People who don't know how to drive a car can easily travel by car using their automatic mode.
Furthermore to discuss with the disadvantage of automatic cars is increasing the accident on the road. In other words, if there is no driver in the car, it will be a high chance of accidents. for explicating the Moscow Times news revealed the data that automatic cars will create crime as well as accidents. Hence, it can be seen that it will help to rise accidents in the community.
Shifting towards another drawback due to driverless vehicles there will be a rise the unemployment in the society. Because Of, this invention several drivers will be jobless. In addition, truck driver and domestic car drivers will be jobless are the main disadvantage of these new creations. for instance, the survey conducted by the New York Times in the United States of America revealed that approximately 94% of drivers will be jobless due to this invention. As a result, it will be a big reason for unemployment in the society.
By the way of conclusion, although it will increase unemployment and accidents, it will be beneficial for those people who don't know how to drive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an automatic mode" with adverb for "automatic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...modern era, There will all vehicles run in an automatic mode. The people who will travel inside the ...
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Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r only will be passengers, not drivers. As far as I am concerned the disadvantages...
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Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...tage of driverless vehicles. People who dont know how to drive a car can easily trav...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...l by car using their automatic mode. Furthermore to discuss with the disadvantage of aut...
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Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... it will be a high chance of accidents. for explicating the Moscow Times news revea...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...in disadvantage of these new creations. for instance, the survey conducted by the N...
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Line 9, column 124, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...will be beneficial for those people who dont know how to drive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as, by the way, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83076923077 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85829013314 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503846153846 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8011399167 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446895766397 0.244688304435 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164109268183 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891065855546 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25820047239 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766827180717 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.