In some cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?
Urban areas all over the world have been suffering from a serious concern, which is thick traffic flows. The reasons for this problem have been attributed to population explosion and the rise of private transport, which I believe could be solved by introducing suitable counter-urbanization policies and encouraging citizens to use public transport.
The causes of high traffic volumes in suburban areas would be the boom in population in these areas as well as the dramatic increase in the number of private vehicles. The more populated these areas are, the higher the number of traffic participants they have, meaning the traffic demand would be too high for a huge number of vehicles to be in use to meet such great requirements. As most other means of transport in significant cities are in poor condition and inconvenient for people to get, they would be filled with concerns while using these transports. As a result, passengers would tend to use private transport to ensure their benefits.
In addition, there are several possible measures to resolve the problem. First and foremost, the authorities would encourage citizens to reside in suburban areas. To make that happen, they should introduce counter-urbanization policies. One of the most feasible ways would be to create more jobs with good compensation policies in rural areas. Another possible solution would be to encourage the use of public transportation. In detail, the government would subsidize some target groups like students, the elderly or war pensioners, invalids, and survivors. Besides that, they should also upgrade the quality of the public transportation system.
In conclusion, the prime reasons for the high volume of traffic in urban areas all around the world are the population boom and the dramatic increase of private vehicles, which could be improved by encouraging people to settle in rural areas and to use public transport.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 168, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ease in the number of private vehicles. The more populated these areas are, the hig...
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Line 2, column 345, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... for a huge number of vehicles to be in use to meet such great requirements. As mos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27922077922 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99850977773 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519480519481 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8440803186 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.142857143 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16944032762 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052106639137 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488351103263 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109937431693 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388973049098 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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