In modern society, people are starting to replace money with other kind of transactions. While some people think that a cashless society would be benefical to citizens, others are concern about security . In this essay, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of using cashless transactions.
On the one hand, people should recognize a very important point is that it would be much easier for people to buy and sell things without using money. In other word, if people want something, they can just exchange it with something that they have, and they don’t have to carry a lot money with them. Another point is that there would be less inflation happening in the society due to the absence of cash. To be specific, for a product to become exchangeable with the others, it needs to have same value as them. Therefore, same products will still have the same proce after a long period of time.
On the other hand, some people are concerns about the security problems. Firstly, making cashless transactions can have a risk of being scam. Specificly, there are a lot of fake products in the world, thereby it can be dangerous for people if they got scam with a fake product and lost their belongings. For example, when society haven’t used money, people usually got scam by trading their buffalos, harses for few pounds of dead crops. Secondly, it would be much harder for people to control all their transactions. This is because everyone would have their own measurements, and people would have a rough time just to control their expense.
In conclusion, after all the above mentioned reasons, I think that cashless transactions would have some significant benefits to the citizens, but it also have some enormous drawbacks. Over all, in my opinion, people can still make cashless transactions but using money to exchange would be better for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, after all, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94267515924 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62947227873 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506369426752 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2932050124 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4375 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193852426728 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860260993849 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857693192326 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158170490837 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813389927007 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.