People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.
The work done by the worker who is not in that field or stream has fewer chances of becoming extraordinary and noticeable. According to the above prompt, people should sometimes do things they do not enjoy doing, thus, I disagree with the statement. it is my firm belief that people should always do what they like for a number of reasons and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, doing the work you most like means staying happy all time with your work which benefits people's health and make them healthy. However, choosing work that you do not like is causing your health problems. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been influenced by my own personal experience. when my dad lose his favorite job which he has been sticking to the time since he graduated, as a result after six months of continuing with another job he got sick because he doing work that he do not like. For this reason, enjoyment in work is important.
In addition, the chances of becoming a master in that work are more in the work which people enjoy while doing this work than the work which people do not. Drawing from my own experience, when I decide to take chemistry subject for my classes on the basis of the last year's student who got a high-paying job because he had chemistry, consequently, I cannot secure my dream points because of my low interest in chemistry that time I have more interest in political science than chemistry. it is certainly clear that people should always choose the work they have an interest in.
For last, the percentage of conflicts among the laborers on work increases because of the mismatch of the decisions likely taken by people who see the work from an interesting point of view. Moreover, people who do not interested in such an idea get into trouble with it, apparently, they got a bad impression at the workplace. For instance, a man who never ever goes on a field visit before has less interest in that work which includes more work like that, in the end, they take a wrong decision about it, and because of that there are more chances of stress and depression.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I strongly believe that people should do things or work they always enjoy doesn't matter what it is.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, consequently, however, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61425061425 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46362988236 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488943488943 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0708492942 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.2 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1333333333 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343752370184 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154545229309 0.076458572812 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162203179957 0.0737576698707 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267882417961 0.150856017488 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141835010251 0.0645574589148 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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