Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved fertilizers and better machinery. However, some of the methods used to do this may be dangerous to human health and may have negative effects on local communities. What are the advantage s and disadvantages?
Nowadays agricultural advancement and better chemical substance help producing crops at very low cost but the patterns which is being used are very hazardous to public wellbeing and also have some adverse consequences on society. There are couple of merits and two major drawbacks of making use of fertilizer in farming.
Using manure in agronomy has several advantages. Among them the two major benefits are reduction in nourishment prices and support local economy. As a mechanism in horticulture increase, the efficiency of farming is also increased which in turn helps to feed more people and make husbandry products costs to lower. These merits illustrate the major profit of utilizing humus in domestic cultivation and deploying horticultural machines.
On the other hand, the utilization of such things in agriculture has two major shortcomings. These include environmental problems and loss of biodiversity. For example, we can hear that the air and soil in many places are degrading year-by-year by the use of chemical compost in fields. This is harmful to human health, particularly for those living and working near it uses. Also, the use of modern machineries prioritize monoculture. Due to the practice of growing single crop in large area, the biodiversity has been start diminishing. Thus, in spite of gain there are some downsides of applying fertilizer and enginery uses.
In conclusion, making use of chemical substance and recent technological instruments in agriculture has both merits and demerits and we have to utilize both keeping in mind both benefits and detriments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to produce' or 'produce'.
Suggestion: to produce; produce
...ment and better chemical substance help producing crops at very low cost but the patterns...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.392 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05522503263 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.4611008234 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2857142857 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136296643087 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404509475114 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035949430268 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761306744433 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434678287943 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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