Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think is a positive or negative development?
The nations are becoming same due to the availability of similar things all around the globe to buy, for the people. I think this is a positive development because it results in the availability of high-quality products at lower cost, and also it enables one to utilize the idea of others.
The product market all around the world is competing. Which force some of the top businesses to expand their products worldwide. So, there will be more competition in the product market, due to which the product owner has to make better quality items and sell it for lower price in order to thrive on the market. This directly benefit consumers as they will be able to get high quality merchandise for minimum price. This also help companies to stay in product market. For example, four years ago, a smartphone company, ZTE, releases its first model worldwide which have some extra functions than previous brands. But, the price was quite higher. In the same year another smartphone company Xiaomi releases its novel smartphone product with similar functions as ZTE but at a cheaper rate. Just after a year, Xiaomi made a profit of almost $5000 billion, while ZTE's model was almost vanished. This scenario suggests that the statement has positive development.
Moreover, it is a notion that, new products are designed from thr idea of some previous products. International market of similar products also benefits this field or idea. For instance, Tesla automobiles were first manufactured in America and marketed worldwide. The entrepreneur all around the world study the design of such vehicles and made their own electric vehicles (TATA's Tiago car is one of an example). Thus, global market of exact product also helps people to come with similar and also some new ideas.
In conclusion, international availability of similar merchandise has several positive aspects like cheaply available better-quality products, and basis (idea) of new product, which make the argument above a positive development. Given the above, it is recommended that almost all the products have to be released in the international market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 54, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...und the world is competing. Which force some of the top businesses to expand their products...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, so, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12209302326 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74933002311 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546511627907 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2050100269 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7368421053 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1052631579 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189957224322 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564469044322 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445649751823 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124776334181 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479715140199 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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