nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?
The complexity of science leads many people to choose a social major rather than science. Therefore, the medical issue and outdated technology will be the effects of this issue.
First of all, there are several causes why fewer students choose science. Firstly, people think that science is difficult. This is because studying science involves chemistry, biology, physics, and mathematics requiring more practice and memorization. Therefore, they argue that a social major is the best choice for them. Secondly, Social skills are more essential. Community asserts that they are human beings and need another neighbor to be able to survive in life. Additionally, Communication skills are key to making good relationships with people, and another skill such as negotiation skills is necessary to make deals with them. These talents can be learned at social faculty.
On the other hand, clinics and old technology will be affected by this issue. The fewer students' interest in science, the fewer people will be occupied in the healthy department. Thus, there will be little quantity of doctors available while recently more people come to hospitals due to the low immune affected by environmental and climate conditions. Therefore, demand will be higher than supply. Hence, it is going to lead to low service quality. In addition, the sophisticated technology in the current era is related to science. It means that the more advanced technology is, the more complex science stuff will be. So, if there are few pupils who admire science, it can be said that technology will not be developed well. Then, the country’s technology system will be outdated. For instance, the fundamental knowledge of Artificial Intelligent is math since AI needs coding which is done by using various number combinations and formulas.
In conclusion, fewer people choose science in many nations due to the difficulty of science. Consequently, it can impact the number of doctors in the future which can lead to the advancement of technology of the country.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ncement of technology of the country.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31076923077 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82342525623 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547692307692 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4014516341 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4545454545 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7727272727 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22727272727 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0981713175547 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340578451557 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388566762122 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826716926038 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383687056262 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ncement of technology of the country.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31076923077 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82342525623 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547692307692 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4014516341 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4545454545 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7727272727 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22727272727 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0981713175547 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340578451557 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388566762122 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826716926038 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383687056262 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.