Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, few of people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go in the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. In this essay, I would examine the reason why some of people choose to watch a movie on smartphone but some of them prefer to look in movies directly. The end of article before coming solution, these are my views.
There is reason why every single person prefers to watch movie throughout buy tickets. They can invite their colleagues or friends or member families. It is due before watching in cinema, they can buy dish and eat it together and after that sometime they can hang out in other place. In cinema they can fell hype of all audience. disadvantages of it is they spend a lot of money to do that.
The other hand say watching throughout technology is simplistic such as on computer or gadget. It is due to they can watch in every place such as in own room and every time. Further, they must not to afford ticket and can select which provide a huge option. Demerit of that is they feel dull when watching by themself.
To sum up that article, these are merit and demerit. So it is depend on person who choose, some of them take part in cinema because many activities that they can do it and taste support atmosphere while watching, but the others choose to watch cinema in technology because simple.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
...s essay, I would examine the reason why some of people choose to watch a movie on smartphone b...
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Line 2, column 330, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Disadvantages
...ema they can fell hype of all audience. disadvantages of it is they spend a lot of money to d...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to ticket'
Suggestion: to ticket
... time. Further, they must not to afford ticket and can select which provide a huge opt...
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Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
..., these are merit and demerit. So it is depend on person who choose, some of them take...
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Line 4, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch cinema in technology because simple.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, while, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38697318008 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29830133924 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2752153486 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3333333333 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269004774164 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974120836007 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151296432047 0.0667982634062 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172081186362 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166550381743 0.056905535591 293% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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