Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams.
How to allocate the financial resources for government to maximize the benefit has been always the heat topic among modern citizens. It can not be denied that athletics can improve physical health of residents, which leads to some in the society hold the view that sports field should be invested more money than arts. As far as culture, economy and government duty are considered, I strongly hold the view that government ought to spend more money in arts instead of athletics. First and foremost, providing financial support to various artistic categories can be constructive to the local culture and promote the image of the city(or the region) comprehensively. A piece of art work like a sculpture or photograph can be the epitome of a certain period history and the carrier of local culture; furthermore,the famous art work can be the cultural advertisement of a city or even a country. The best example is the Denmark\'s Little Mermaid. Thus, art is important to the culture of a region. If government put more money in arts, it can promote local cultural industry in two ways. The first way is to preserve local culture. These artists who are given the subsidies and supported by local government can settle in this area and learn or create local culture naturally. As a result, the local cultural elements can be seen in the new created painting, music, video...etc. The second way is to create new culture as the inspirations of artists absorbed from local culture can be blended with modern or exotic culture of their own hometowns. However, All the benefits above can be brought by investing athletics. Second,the fact that the prosperous art field contribute to the local economy sustainably also indicates that government should fund arts compared with sports. Take the example of Japan, a country with developed art industry: in the late 20th century, the central government promulgated a series of policies to promote the art industry and improve the oversea influence of Japanese arts. So, various art industry grew up in the past few decades, in the meantime converting to the monetary profit. Furthermore, the new and active art industry, like cartoon and comic art, provided countless jobs and improved the economy. Had the Japanese government not invested the art industry, Japan would not stabilize its position as an economic power. Maybe funding athletics can also spur the economy. However, the flip-side is that only few people,the members of famous team, can enjoy the most part of profit. After all, investing sports is more difficult to form a complete industry structure. Admittedly, there do exist some factors such as public health can contribute to the opposing idea that more capitals are supposed to be spent in athletics, because investing sports can improve the health of citizens by building gyms. Nevertheless, such opinion needs to be examined meticulously. In fact, the government does not need to put extra money in sports as the sports stars are always more popular than artists and the famous teams are never short of investors. Thus, I still stick to my position. In a nutshell, after a clear analysis of the aforementioned statement, I am confident to maintain that government ought to spend more funds in support of arts instead of athletics.can enjoy the most part of profit. After all, investing sports is more difficult to form a complete industry structure. Admittedly, there do exist some factors such as public health can contribute to the opposing idea that more capitals are supposed to be spent in athletics, because investing sports can improve the health of citizens by building gyms. Nevertheless, such opinion needs to be examined meticulously. In fact, the government does not need to put extra money in sports as the sports stars are always more popular than artists and the famous teams are never short of investors. Thus, I still stick to my position. In a nutshell, after a clear analysis of the aforementioned statement, I am confident to maintain that government ought to spend more funds in support of arts instead of athletics.can enjoy the most part of profit. After all, investing sports is more difficult to form a complete industry structure. Admittedly, there do exist some factors such as public health can contribute to the opposing idea that more capitals are supposed to be spent in athletics, because investing sports can improve the health of citizens by building gyms. Nevertheless, such opinion needs to be examined meticulously. In fact, the government does not need to put extra money in sports as the sports stars are always more popular than artists and the famous teams are never short of investors. Thus, I still stick to my position. In a nutshell, after a clear analysis of the aforementioned statement, I am confident to maintain that government ought to spend more funds in support of arts instead of athletics.investing sports is more difficult to form a complete industry structure. Admittedly, there do exist some factors such as public health can contribute to the opposing idea that more capitals are supposed to be spent in athletics, because investing sports can improve the health of citizens by building gyms. Nevertheless, such opinion needs to be examined meticulously. In fact, the government does not need to put extra money in sports as the sports stars are always more popular than artists and the famous teams are never short of investors. Thus, I still stick to my position. In a nutshell, after a clear analysis of the aforementioned statement, I am confident to maintain that government ought to spend more funds in support of arts instead of athletics.investing sports is more difficult to form a complete industry structure. Admittedly, there do exist some factors such as public health can contribute to the opposing idea that more capitals are supposed to be spent in athletics, because investing sports can improve the health of citizens by building gyms. Nevertheless, such opinion needs to be examined meticulously. In fact, the government does not need to put extra money in sports as the sports stars are always more popular than artists and the famous teams are never short of investors. Thus, I still stick to my position. In a nutshell, after a clear analysis of the aforementioned statement, I am confident to maintain that government ought to spend more funds in support of arts instead of athletics.there do exist some factors such as public health can contribute to the opposing idea that more capitals are supposed to be spent in athletics, because investing sports can improve the health of citizens by building gyms. Nevertheless, such opinion needs to be examined meticulously. In fact, the government does not need to put extra money in sports as the sports stars are always more popular than artists and the famous teams are never short of investors. Thus, I still stick to my position. In a nutshell, after a clear analysis of the aforementioned statement, I am confident to maintain that government ought to spend more funds in support of arts instead of athletics.there do exist some factors such as public health can contribute to the opposing idea that more capitals are supposed to be spent in athletics, because investing sports can improve the health of citizens by building gyms. Nevertheless, such opinion needs to be examined meticulously. In fact, the government does not need to put extra money in sports as the sports stars are always more popular than artists and the famous teams are never short of investors. Thus, I still stick to my position. In a nutshell, after a clear analysis of the aforementioned statement, I am confident to maintain that government ought to spend more funds in support of arts instead of athletics.because investing sports can improve the health of citizens by building gyms. Nevertheless, such opinion needs to be examined meticulously. In fact, the government does not need to put extra money in sports as the sports stars are always more popular than artists and the famous teams are never short of investors. Thus, I still stick to my position. In a nutshell, after a clear analysis of the aforementioned statement, I am confident to maintain that government ought to spend more funds in support of arts instead of athletics.because investing sports can improve the health of citizens by building gyms. Nevertheless, such opinion needs to be examined meticulously. In fact, the government does not need to put extra money in sports as the sports stars are always more popular than artists and the famous teams are never short of investors. Thus, I still stick to my position. In a nutshell, after a clear analysis of the aforementioned statement, I am confident to maintain that government ought to spend more funds in support of arts instead of athletics.In a nutshell, after a clear analysis of the aforementioned statement, I am confident to maintain that government ought to spend more funds in support of arts instead of athletics.In a nutshell, after a clear analysis of the aforementioned statement, I am confident to maintain that government ought to spend more funds in support of arts instead of athletics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, still, thus, after all, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 62.0 15.1003584229 411% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 54.0 9.8082437276 551% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.0286738351 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 239.0 52.1666666667 458% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 51.0 8.0752688172 632% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 7672.0 1977.66487455 388% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 1522.0 407.700716846 373% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04073587385 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 6.24602420795 4.48103885553 139% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96602247804 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.179369250986 0.524837075471 34% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 2389.5 618.680645161 386% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 21.0 3.08781362007 680% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 27.0 3.51792114695 767% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 4.94265232975 728% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 64.0 20.6003584229 311% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.320302461 48.9658058833 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 119.875 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.78125 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.45110844103 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 40.0 11.8709677419 337% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 21.0 4.88709677419 430% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24329692277 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710811552751 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606683538015 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24329692277 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.23 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 86.8835125448 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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