Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Is it a positive or negative development?
Recently, certain countries have attained global recognition in sports by emphasizing the development of exclusive training facilities for elite athletes instead of offering sports facilities that are available to the general public. While I believe that this approach has proven to be effective in producing world-class athletes, it also raises questions about its overall impact on society.
On the one hand, building specialized facilities for top athletes can have many positive effects. Firstly, it can provide a safe and well-equipped environment for athletes to train and compete in. This can lead to improved performance and can help to prevent injuries, which is especially important for high-level athletes who put their bodies under extreme stress. Secondly, investing in top athletes can raise the profile of a country and bring international recognition, which can have positive effects on tourism and the economy. For example, The Moroco national football team competing in the world cup helped elevate the nation's standing by reaching the semi-finals. A series of newspapers around the world have hailed them as the black horse in the biggest sporting event on the planet. Finally, supporting top athletes can inspire and motivate younger generations to pursue sports, leading to a healthier and more active society.
On the other hand, this approach can have negative consequences, particularly for those who are not elite athletes. Firstly, it can lead to unequal access to sports facilities, which can perpetuate social inequalities. If resources are only directed towards top athletes, other members of society may be excluded from sports and physical activity. Secondly, it can lead to a narrow focus on certain sports, which can limit the diversity of sports available and prevent the development of athletes in other areas. By focusing exclusively on training top athletes, a country may overlook the importance of promoting physical activity and sports participation among the general population. This could have negative consequences for public health, as well as for the development of grass-roots sports programs that could identify and nurture future top athletes.
In conclusion, , the approach of building specialized facilities for top athletes has both positive and negative aspects. Therefore, it is important for countries to strike a balance between supporting elite athletes and providing accessible sports facilities for all members of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60904255319 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97212693975 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521276595745 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 668.7 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2577246107 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.058823529 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23529411765 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355396677205 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127443146124 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984270978964 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240737496349 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046662529089 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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