It is often said that having a higher salary is the most important factor in job satisfaction, while other people contend that there are far more significant elements. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument before giving a personal opinion.
On the one hand, having a higher salary is frequently linked to job satisfaction, as it provides a person with the financial security to support the lifestyle they wish to lead. People who have a higher source of income tend to be able to acquire nicer homes and cars, and experience fewer financial pressures, all of which can contribute to higher levels of job satisfaction. Furthermore, a higher salary can lead to a sense of accomplishment and status, which can be very rewarding.
On the other hand, there are those who believe that there are more vital components to job satisfaction than the amount of money one earns. For example, people often find satisfaction in having the autonomy to make their own decisions, while others draw satisfaction from feeling that their work is making a positive difference. Additionally, having a pleasant and supportive work environment is also a significant factor in job satisfaction, as it helps to foster a feeling of safety, belonging, and collaboration.
In my opinion, a combination of salary and other factors is essential in obtaining job satisfaction. Having a higher wage is desirable, as it allows one to cover the costs of living, but having meaningful work and a supportive environment is also essential for long-term satisfaction. Therefore, both salary and other factors need to be taken into account to ensure that one finds job satisfaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...h sides of the argument before giving a personal opinion. On the one hand, having a higher sa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12132352941 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08541318884 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7036543065 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.636363636 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325611881703 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134308459198 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798507380593 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217432679137 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095282520578 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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