More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
In modern society, people prefer moving to another cities for a better life. However, there are some difficulties inside the city life. So in this essay, I will explain the reason and the suggestion for this issue.
There are many reasons to explain for the difficult life in city. First of all, it is hard to live inside the social of city, especially with people who come from the countrysides. Difference of lifestyle, the increasing economic and local people is all elements which can make migrating people feel uncomfortable. Secondly, some policies are only applied in the city, so migrating people need to knowledge it immediately. Moreover, it can be more restricted than that in the countryside, for example, traffic and business. Thirdly, city is more complicated than we thought. Violence, rob, or sex can be very normal in some cities. Those bad elements not only hurting people, but also persuading them to follow it when people want to improve their life.
Besides the difficulties, there are still have some solutions which can resolve the problems, and the government should try it to increase the quality of society. First, the government should have more supporting policies to help people can live in the city more easily and comfortable such as providing houses, or opportunities for working. Secondly, they should restrict and punish seriously about bad elements inside their country. This can help the government control their people’s life more easily and rise the quality of life in the city.
In conclusion, city life can improve people’s life if only they can achieve the difficulties inside the city. In my opinion, not only the government but also migrating people should have more responsible for their improving life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16433566434 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73362403716 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51048951049 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9939193927 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8823529412 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35294117647 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.500197587411 0.244688304435 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16917123505 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109905142339 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.33862931925 0.151304729494 224% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357838241415 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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