At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, the phenomenon of rejuvenation in many countries is higher consisting of a large number of young adults which is more than that of older ones. While this development may bring about some downsides, I would argue they are overshadowed by the upsides.
Admittedly, there are some minor drawbacks to this tendency. First of all, having many young adults mean that the amount of occupations is not enough to meet the need of these people for their situation position in their job. For that reason, people who don’t have good specialized knowledge, also essential skills, then they might be unemployed. In addition, most adolescents have their own ideas for hot potatoes all over the world different from the elderly populations, and each other always protects their private opinions. This makes more and more disagreements in society between the youth and the older ones than before.
Despite the disadvantages above, I believe that rejuvenation is helpful for society. One thing is the formidable labor force in each country. They are exposed to several new knowledge and learned the experience of the old. As a consequence, they can take advantage of their knowledge in their work and create some new solutions to solve the problems in their country. Also, using their innovations to invent many inventions which are helpful for daily life. Another thing is that most young adults like to do voluntaries. For instance, during the coronavirus disease, there were a number of students who volunteer to do in the isolation areas. These are excellent trends of the youth which help society very much.
In short, I believe that unemployment and disagreements clearly outweigh any of the minor positive aspects that could result from rejuvenation, nowadays.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 85, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... many countries is higher consisting of a large number of young adults which is more than that of...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d result from rejuvenation, nowadays.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, then, while, another thing, as for, for instance, in addition, in short, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23157894737 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79760263195 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0775970826 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1875 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178354800176 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542693704953 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571369704273 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105660178803 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641591569474 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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