The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development.
Maps depict for the current and future Islip town center.
Overall, it's clear from the maps that the dual carriageway will be replaced by the main road and let the main road serve as a pedestrian-only path around the mall.
In the current map, the town center is developed around a main road, stretching from the west to the east. There are many stores in the north and south of the road. Most of the south is a resident and a park in the east and a school in the Southwest. Both structures are connected to the main road on the side of the road.
In the future map, a circle around the city center and this road is expected to be built as a double route. The middle part of the main road is expected to be pedestrian. In the north, the store in this section will be demolished and a shopping center and housing area will be built. A bus stop will be expected to be built in the west and a parking lot in the east. Although the southern part of Islip did not see major changes other than some new houses
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 368, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the west and a parking lot in the east. Although the southern part of Islip did not see ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19487179487 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24240408231 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482051282051 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8084795745 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3636363636 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.181818181818 5.23603664747 3% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141265859963 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675326261584 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100178122761 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134079314696 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114777118794 0.0819641961636 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.2329268293 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 61.2550243902 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 11.4140731707 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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