Nowadays, sports is a big business with high earnings for professional sports people and companies involved both financially and other ways. Is this a positive or negative development for sports?
Nowadays, some people said that sports is a huge business with high income for professional sports people and businesses involved both economic and other ways. This veiws have both benefit and drawback to the devolopment for sports. The following essay will analyse these statement more clearly
On the one hand, sports is a big business with high earnings for players like football, basketball or swimming. It help people can earn a lot of money for their life and improving themselves better than before. professional sports people use their money for trainning their mentality, their physical health and their experience to serve the country's sports background. Furthermore, high income also be inspiration, motivation and confident to youngs generation follow their dreams which can change their life and get a lot of money in the near future to help their family, friends and sociaty. For instance, with some children in countryside who have ability for playing football usually choose football club in their country improve themselves to get more money in the future and take respect from the sociaty. In addition, the professional players with high earning also help economy of their nation more devolop following that, the life of people will better and better.
On the other hand, some companies depend too much on sports people, they use the image of player. Exploiting the labor of the players for their own profit. it will make the player out of energy, tired and bored, that is a reason for bad perform in the match of each player. Moreover, some professional player are concentrate too much on their image in the internet, so they do not have enough time for trainning and improving themselves, it will be have a bad influence for their level and the achivement of their country. For example, many famous people are just concentrate in advertising so that will make them worse than before. In additon, some dispute are happen between player and the companies about money and profit. that will make a bad press to the sociaty of each side.
To conclude, this statement have their own advantage and drawback appropriate with each person, but each player have to known that specialize is the most significant. professional sport people need to concentrate in their field for better and better to help their country more devolop.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this statement' or 'these statements'?
Suggestion: this statement; these statements
...ports. The following essay will analyse these statement more clearly On the one hand, sports...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l analyse these statement more clearly On the one hand, sports is a big busines...
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Line 2, column 118, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...ke football, basketball or swimming. It help people can earn a lot of money for thei...
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Line 2, column 214, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Professional
...mproving themselves better than before. professional sports people use their money for train...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ife of people will better and better. On the other hand, some companies depend...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...or of the players for their own profit. it will make the player out of energy, tir...
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Line 3, column 665, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...an before. In additon, some dispute are happen between player and the companies about ...
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Line 3, column 729, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...d the companies about money and profit. that will make a bad press to the sociaty of...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ad press to the sociaty of each side. To conclude, this statement have their o...
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Line 4, column 170, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Professional
...hat specialize is the most significant. professional sport people need to concentrate in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05426356589 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57418038668 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462532299742 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4383486402 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.058823529 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7647058824 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308752227327 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121107100028 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113074314296 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234431736252 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115432685555 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this statement' or 'these statements'?
Suggestion: this statement; these statements
...ports. The following essay will analyse these statement more clearly On the one hand, sports...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l analyse these statement more clearly On the one hand, sports is a big busines...
^^
Line 2, column 118, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...ke football, basketball or swimming. It help people can earn a lot of money for thei...
^^^^
Line 2, column 214, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Professional
...mproving themselves better than before. professional sports people use their money for train...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ife of people will better and better. On the other hand, some companies depend...
^^
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...or of the players for their own profit. it will make the player out of energy, tir...
^^
Line 3, column 665, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...an before. In additon, some dispute are happen between player and the companies about ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 729, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...d the companies about money and profit. that will make a bad press to the sociaty of...
^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ad press to the sociaty of each side. To conclude, this statement have their o...
^^
Line 4, column 170, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Professional
...hat specialize is the most significant. professional sport people need to concentrate in the...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05426356589 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57418038668 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462532299742 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4383486402 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.058823529 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7647058824 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308752227327 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121107100028 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113074314296 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234431736252 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115432685555 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.