Any country should be able to sell goods to other countries without the restrictions of the government. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that with the purpose of prospecting the economy among nations around the world, there should be the creation of a free overseas trade market to allow any nation to export without permission. From my point of view, I contend that this policy may do more harm than good for different aspects of a country. This essay will shed light on more details behind this opinion.
One major ground behind this view is why the government should introduce strict restrictions on exported products lying in guaranteeing the quality of products. In fact, obviously, each country has to import a massive number of goods on a daily basis, including clothes, food, and technological engine. Moreover, there are numerous companies and organizations which are concentrating on generating as much profit without noticing the community advantages, even low-quality of products. Therefore, if the authority does not ban a rigid screen before importing, it might lead to a huge amount of fake items sprouting across the country. As a result, those merchandises definitely pose serious threats to residents’ health, which may cause heart disease or respiratory problems. For instance, according to a recent report, there are many boxes of fake Ordinary skincare products, imported into the Vietnam market. Those products contain detrimental elements causing serious skin allergies for many people.
Another reason springs from having some detrimental effects on the whole development of the economy. Due to the fact that tons of products are purchased without strict checking, it may a tough challenge for the government to control as well as allocate them to different market areas. Therefore, the government may find it hard to evaluate the sufficiency of the financial economy. In addition, many luxury items are freely available in the market, which will increase domestic competition and reduce local purchasing power. Unless the authorities pass a thorough inspection and policy relating to abroad products, many local goods may be got stocked, and hard to gain more market share due to consumers prefer buying foreign items. For example, many local companies that have manufactured silk patterns in Vietnam's countryside have gone out of business because of fierce competition by big players, typically TJX corporation.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the government should introduce comprehensive policies regard to imported products in order to protect residents’ benefits and minimize the harsh national competition.
- People in the community can buy cheaper products nowadays Do advantages outweigh disadvantages 56
- The plan below shows the village of Pebbleton 20 years ago and now 11
- Topic Some people argue that we should do research into our family history Others agree with the view that we should focus on the present and future generations 56
- Topic It is true that traveling to other countries helps us understand other cultures and their traditions 78
- Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus Do you think this is a positive or negative development 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2146.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48849104859 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90377419115 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621483375959 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2884427227 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.235294118 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.70588235294 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129939739362 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351500999055 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038246530071 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745385617177 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209859665075 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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