The maps show a beachfront in Australia in 1950 and today.
The maps illustrate how a beachfront in Australia changed over a 70 - year period from 1950 to today.
Overall, it is clear that a beachfront in Australia has witnessed significant transformations, with the most noticeable changes being the addition of facilities and many changes in the infrastructure of the area since 1950.
In 1950, the access road only went as far as the car park located next to the pavilion. However, today the access road was expanded all the way around to the lighthouse next to the beach. Moreover, another car park has been erected, replacing the old children’s playground area.
The two swimming pools situated beside the beach still remain today; however, the pool located on the western side of the beachfront has been converted into a 50m pool. In addition, a restaurant and surf club have also been constructed nearby the 50m pool. The 25m pool next to the lighthouse remains unchanged, and another surf club has also been built next to the lighthouse.
- The chart below show percentage of total water used five different sectors in Sydney Australia in 1997 and 2007 67
- In this day and age children doing part time jobs have been becoming one of the most significant issues to be encouraged by their parents Do the advantages of this outweigh the isavantages
- The maps show a beachfront in Australia in 1950 and today 84
- The chart below show percentages of water used in different sectors in Sydney Australia in 1997 and 2007
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, still, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02409638554 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84664889766 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60843373494 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.608216091 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230796619206 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991731366233 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129968571446 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172923133833 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145605808977 0.0819641961636 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.