People Should Undertake Risky Action only after They have Carefully Considered its Consequences
People and societies often suffer from consequences of risky actions. Inaccountability for ramifications cause unchangeable .
I tend to agree with the suggestion that it is essential to account for consequences of dangerous undertakings. It is essential to calculate outcomes and ramifications of every action as well as its impact on our world. Furthermore, I believe that all of the previously happened catastrophic events could be avoided, if a risky action were replaced by collaboration.
Japanese incursion on Pearl Harbor can be considered as a risky action. The time it happened, Japan was afraid to loose its influence in WWII therefore its government resorted to such a risky action. It did it in a hurry perceiving it as a last chance to show off its power. As a result, it only exacerbated its position and turned from a rather tentative participant to the main looser with harrowing ecological ramifications.
Risky actions is a rather broad term. Trading and gambling may be both subsumed into a category of risky initiatives. Nevertheless, trading is appreciated as a smart occupation and gambling is referred to as a straightforward way to lose wealth. Tradings requires years of higher education. Traders do careful preparations before every work day. They don't do any kind of a magic nor predict markets but they know how to act on the markets to gain income or secure investments. At the same time gamblers act solely relying on luck and end up losing money.
I believe people commit only to actions and decisions only after careful consideration of their outcomes and impact on our world.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ity for ramifications cause unchangeable . I tend to agree with the suggestion ...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... our world. Furthermore, I believe that all of the previously happened catastrophic events...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...e time it happened, Japan was afraid to loose its influence in WWII therefore its gov...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 352, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...reparations before every work day. They dont do any kind of a magic nor predict mark...
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Line 7, column 364, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
...before every work day. They dont do any kind of a magic nor predict markets but they know...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, kind of, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 264.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14015151515 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24184548086 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1029861028 60.3974514979 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.8235294118 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5294117647 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329330291038 0.243740707755 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824227150894 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718566468653 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16615649458 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601840332153 0.0667264976115 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ity for ramifications cause unchangeable . I tend to agree with the suggestion ...
^^
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... our world. Furthermore, I believe that all of the previously happened catastrophic events...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...e time it happened, Japan was afraid to loose its influence in WWII therefore its gov...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 352, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...reparations before every work day. They dont do any kind of a magic nor predict mark...
^^^^
Line 7, column 364, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
...before every work day. They dont do any kind of a magic nor predict markets but they know...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, kind of, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 264.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14015151515 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24184548086 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1029861028 60.3974514979 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.8235294118 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5294117647 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329330291038 0.243740707755 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824227150894 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718566468653 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16615649458 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601840332153 0.0667264976115 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.