People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those
decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree
or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the
position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you
should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold
true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The author claims that poor decision makers are those
people who make decisions by considering their emotions
and then later on justify those emotions logically. This issue
is a contentious one but I would like to disagree with the
author because of thee folowing reasons.
Firstly, every good decision in the history does not claim
that emotions were not involved in it and that they have
not been justified later by logic. For example, initially many
people were involved in the feminist movements only
because they were emotionally concerned by the suffering
of women. They took the decision based on emotions and
then successfully justified it with logic to get the right to
vote for women.
Secondly, researchers now suggest that EQ(Emotional
Quotient) is important for a good decision-making
process. So, people who make decisions based on emotions
and later justify logically are not por decision makers. For
example, a political leader who understand the needs of
his/her voters and make decisins emotionally for them and
then justify his/her decisions logically is a better decision
maker than who only takes decisions logically without
feelings or emotions.
Finally, with the increase in technology, if the emotions were
not at all imortant in decision making process then why
researchers are so desperate to add feelings and emotions
in artificial intelligent devices. So,decisons without emotions
and purely on logic are bad decisions. It does not matter it
that decisions are justified later or not. For example, without
emotions robots could kill people if they are asked to do
so. This makes them poor decision makers.
To sum up, I disagree with the statement which is asserted
by the author.The statement says that people who use
emotions to make decisions and afterwards justify it with
logic are poor decision makers.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 26, column 38, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , decisons
...s in artificial intelligent devices. So,decisons without emotions and purely on logic a...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 32, column 15, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...tement which is asserted by the author.The statement says that people who use emo...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 296.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41216216216 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72464069377 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47972972973 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.670614546 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 33.0 4.97078651685 664% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.471676434957 0.243740707755 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191451155768 0.0831039109588 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124954465516 0.0758088955206 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131648066146 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102582117434 0.0667264976115 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 26, column 38, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , decisons
...s in artificial intelligent devices. So,decisons without emotions and purely on logic a...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 32, column 15, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...tement which is asserted by the author.The statement says that people who use emo...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 296.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41216216216 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72464069377 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47972972973 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.670614546 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 33.0 4.97078651685 664% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.471676434957 0.243740707755 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191451155768 0.0831039109588 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124954465516 0.0758088955206 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131648066146 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102582117434 0.0667264976115 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.